Hey hey. Hopefully I can think of articles to post on here fairly regularly. If not, suck it. I'll probably write about movies I like, stuff I'm thinking about, or just anything. So here I am!
Published on January 24, 2005 By apdelong31 In Personal Relationships
(Note: not the same Samantha that has an account on JU in the AC Guild)

You're so different from the last,
You come to me; I went to her,
She wanted sex, and I wanted
To give it to her
But I love you Samantha,
for other reasons.

You're so cute, there's nothing else to call it
Innocent like a child, sensible as a woman
I haven't had this much fun
for years, since I was young
I had fun before,
but for other reasons.

Everyone asks "You tapped that shit yet?"
"When ya gonna fuck her?"
"Seriously? When's it gonna happen?"
I hate that, I don't want to fuck you
You're too innocent, I don't want to taint you
Alas, they're still my friends
but for other reasons

Oh Samantha, I say to you
Oh Andrew, you say to me
I love you too, I love you most
No you don't, but yes I do
Let's call it a draw, fair enough
We love each other, and not
for other reasons.


Now I didn't write this for praise and glory, I'd like to be a better writer, so don't be afraid to tell me what you didn't like. Just remember, there's a line between constructive criticism and insulting my abilities, just think of the children.

Comments
on Jan 24, 2005
Nice I am glad you said it wasn't Sam for JU, but I believe I knew who you were talkin about. But some people don't. Nice am glad you, fun and I hope you two have the best.

Stacey
on Jan 24, 2005
Hey, not bad. It came from the heart...so that makes it good. Maybe some different words here and there, but I'm not going to break it down. I think it's pretty good....you just poured your heart out...and it makes me want to go Awwwwwww....and that I shall, "Awwwwwwwwww". Really, a poem doesn't have to be all technical...write what you feel, and it'll be good.

~Zoo
on Jan 24, 2005
but I believe I knew who you were talkin about.


Duh, it's his girlfriend...the good one.

~Zoo
on Jan 24, 2005
Its good that you'll feel this way about her andy!
on Jan 24, 2005
Oh Samantha, I say to youOh Andrew, you say to me


Right there is the AWWW moment...it just makes you smile

~Zoo
on Jan 24, 2005
But if I said "Oh Shaun", it'd wipe that smile off your face faster than dust in a rainstorm.
on Jan 24, 2005
I know it does... I've had to resort to the homosexual references a time or two to get him to stop talking before.

Capt. over and out!
on Jan 25, 2005
I like it too, but i would have used different words for the third verse. But then again, that's probably what makes it the most honest part of it.
on Jan 25, 2005
I figured it wasn't me...

Sam(the other one)
on Jan 25, 2005
Awwww....that's so sweet Andy! I think you're finally growing up! Yay! lol

~carebear~
on Jan 25, 2005
But if I said "Oh Shaun", it'd wipe that smile off your face faster than dust in a rainstorm.


True enough....

I know it does... I've had to resort to the homosexual references a time or two to get him to stop talking before.


I loathe you.....

~Zoo
on Jan 25, 2005
Sorry 'bout that, island_gurl, unfortunately that's about all I hear at school. Not necessarily directed toward me, but it still means the same. It's pretty pathetic, I can't wait to leave this place.